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What A Moron! Pound TF

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"Come on Moron, and throw the ball already!"

"Stop calling me that..." Billy said, as he was trying to dodge from player to player, as he was trying to find an opening to throw the ball into the hoop, or to pass it to somebody. 

"Hurry up, Moron! We don't got all day!"

Billy gritted his teeth, as he regretted on ever joining the basketball team, as his whole team always makes fun at how bad he plays the game during practice. Especially today, when all of the kids are ganging up on him, by trying to make him trip and fall, or by trying to take the ball straight out of his grasp, as he was trying to dribble the ball with so many of them-

"Oof!"

"Yes! We got it! Hahaha! Try to better next time, Moron!"

One of the kids told Billy, as all of the other kids just laughed in Billy's face, as he fell on the floor, as he thought he scraped something on his knee, as he looked up and whispered.

"I'm not a Moron..."

"Oh yes you are! You even suck at all the games that we go to!"

"No, I don't!"

" Of course you, like how last game you did nothing at all!"

"It was because I was placed at the bench that night."

"Well, duh! Because if you didn't, then you'll just be handing the ball to the other team!"

"No, that's not true! Its just hard to dodge them from taking the ball away from you!"

"Oh please! Even a five year old can do that!"

"And how do you-"

"And when you talk about that film, what was it, um........ Space something-"

"Space Jam, the movie called Space Jam."

"Oh right, with the stupid little alien dudes in it!"

"Are you for real? There called Nerdlocks! Nerdlocks! Not alien dudes! And come on, they were awesome!"

"Oh, then if there so awesome, then ho come they got their butts kicked in the end, huh?"

"Because Micheal Jordan was there, that's why! I mean really, if he was never at that game, you know that Bug's Bunny's whole team would have been beaten in millisecond!"

"Oh yeah, because there so much better, huh? I mean, don't they live in a planet called Moron Mountain, Moron!"

"Well, y-yeah they do, but that doesn't mean anything-"

"And who was that one alien you like from that film? I don't know, some orange alien that has a hunch on his back!"

"Y-Yeah! And he turns into that huge Monstar! And he's like the coolest one, since he's the leader of the team and-"

"Whoah, i'm sorry but did you just say he's cool? That you like him."

"Yeah, I just said I liked Zilch-"

"Zilch?! That is his name?! Zilch?! That's pretty dumb, Moron!"

"N-No its not! He's name isn't stupid! And he's a pretty good leader!" 

"Oh really?"

"Yeah, and maybe someday I can be a leader like him."

"Seriously, you think you can actually be a leader?"

"Yeah, I may not have the skill to be one yet, but i'm pretty sure someday-"

"Oh yes, a moron like you can certainly be a leader for even a basketball to me, even though you have no idea what's going on, and again with all of the mess ups you cause, in your dreams."

"But-"

"Faced it kid, you'll always be a moron for the rest of your life! HAHAHAHA!"

The kid laughed, as all of the other kids were laughing with him again, as Billy felt embarrassed now. After dreaming for years of becoming an official NBA player, of ever making some friends, or even have a team that can trust and relay on him whenever he's needed. But, he knows for a fact that his team doesn't want him, as he whispered. 

"Your right, i'm just a Moron."

As he got up, and ran out of the gymnasium, as he went to the locker room to change his basketball clothes, pack up, and go home.

"Why did I do this to myself? Why did I even try to be a basketball player? There right about me, i'll never make it...."

Billy said out loud to himself, as he reached his locker, and opened it, expecting to find his backpack and clothing safe inside. Until he realized that there no where to be seen, as all he could find were the some sort of different basketball outfit, as he took them out of the locker and examined them, as Billy realized that they are some clothes that the Monstars wear.

"This is just great. My stuff got stolen from one of those jerks, and they threw these clothes in just to make fun of me some more! God, this day sucks!"

But then Billy realized that as he looked at the clothes that they were all in his size, as he said.

"But, since I have these clothes, I guess I can try them on, since I always wanted to actually wear these in real life."

As he took his clothes off, and placed the new clothing on, as he thought how cool it was to actually be wearing the black shoes, the black pants, and the black shirt with its white 0 straight on the front and back as he said.

"Wow, this is amazing! Its to bad I can't be Zilch, then I would show them that I can be a good leader!"

Billy said, as he was oblivious to his clothes glowing, as his skin suddenly changed color from white to orange, as the palm of his hands turned light orange, as he gained dark spots on his two shoulders, as he said.

"And besides, at least I have the look of him with my orange skin, which none of them have, those jealous jerks!"

Then Billy's mass of muscles grew all over his boy, as his arms, legs and stomach all pumped out huge amounts of muscles, as he grew from    an 5"0", to 20"0", as he said.

"And with huge muscles and size, I can smash those tunes like jelly!"

Billy said, as he laughed in his new monstrous voice, as he thought about the idea of squashing the Looney tunes, as his yellow hair was sucked into his scalp, as the top of his head went from a circle shape, to a cone shape with a small circle arch, as it also grew three dark orange spots, as his now orange dark nails on his hands grew out into long sharp claws, as he said.

"And I can personally tear that rabbit apart, piece by piece."

As Billy laughed, his mouth stretched out wider across his face, as his old human teeth were changed into huge sharp teeth, as his ears grew out long and thin, as they ended with a point at the top, as his eyes grew sinister, as his eye color changed from blue to black, as Billy was no more, as his mind was changed into Zilch's, as he looked down at his former self's clothes as he said.

"Hey, who was the little pipsqueak that wore these? HAHAHA! He must have ran away from a Monstar like me, the shrimp!"

Zilch said, as he picked up the clothes, as he was going to tear them into a millions pieces, until the clothes a limited a huge light out of nowhere, as Zilch's features changed from an realistic looking Monstar, to 3D animation, as the locker room changed into an animated outside basketball field, as is it was night time, as Zilch was looking down at all the Looney Tunes, scared out of there minds, as Zilch and his whole team are now the Monstars, as Zilch smiled and said.

"So, whose the Moron now?"
I finally made a TF for one of the Monstars, as I realized that I would never write a TF with five different characters. Because, when I was writing it, the whole thing was just a mess. When I was trying to write it all down, it was taking so long just to get to the TF part, and the character's were just being annoying by arguing throughout the whole thing, and the transformations were long, and it was just a disaster. So, i'm like okay screw it, i'm just using one of these guys, and I used Zilch because he was the only one that I ever finished his transformation in that first story, and the tf wasn't really that bad, so I used him since I had some really good ideas on Zilch since he was like the only Monstar that had any real character, so i'm really glad how this one turned out, so I hope you guys enjoy it as much as I enjoyed writing it!:D
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monstermaster13's avatar
I think the word you were looking for is illuminated and not 'a limited'.